I would like some feedback on this song I wrote :) Please, comment!!!
Verse 1:
Here I am Lord, once again
I need to be with you.
So many distractions crowd my life I can't find peace.
You are my only hope of life,
And you're my only love.
Chorus:
Cause when my world shakes, and I'm confused.
When everything seems so short lived, You never change.
When I breath my last breath, when the earth passes away, You never change.
Verse 2:
You have my heart in your hands, Use me.
You're a Love who died once and once for all,
So how could I fall into something else,
How couldn't I find myself wrapped in your arms.
(Chorus)
Bridge:
You never change, you never change, no... You stay the same.
You never fail, you never fall, you never fail us oh God...
(Chorus)
Remember, Please Comment! :)
Love,
Katherine
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