I would like some feedback on this song I wrote :) Please, comment!!!
Here I am Lord, once again
I need to be with you.
So many distractions crowd my life I can't find peace.
You are my only hope of life,
And you're my only love.
Cause when my world shakes, and I'm confused.
When everything seems so short lived, You never change.
When I breath my last breath, when the earth passes away, You never change.
You have my heart in your hands, Use me.
You're a Love who died once and once for all,
So how could I fall into something else,
How couldn't I find myself wrapped in your arms.
You never change, you never change, no... You stay the same.
You never fail, you never fall, you never fail us oh God...
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